Many high school students in Korea are under intense pressure to studying harder and harder because they should enter prestige University for getting a good job so that they always focus on their study. For them, there is nothing more than studying in their life. Even they do not care of their family anymore. From this situation, the poem, THE RED HAT, can remind the students of family’s love, especially parent’s love when the students learn this poem in their lesson. This poem talks about the moment when the parent lets their son go to school alone with a concern whether or not he can make it. This poem would be suitable for high school students to teach in the three points of view.
First of all, after the students learn this poem. the relationship with their parent will be better than before because the students can learn how much their parent loves them. In considering, then, they might start having conversations a lot with their parent. Building concrete relationship with parent will be helpful for students in different ways.
In addition, the languages, especially the vocabulary in this poem are challenging so that the students need to make an effort to understand this poem well. Even though this poem’s vocabulary are difficult, students’ vocabulary level will be improved after going through this poem.
Lastly, this poem will remind students of their warm memory they had when they were little because this story is about the moment that many students might have. Therefore, the students would understand this poem well with their experience.
First of all, after the students learn this poem. the relationship with their parent will be better than before because the students can learn how much their parent loves them. In considering, then, they might start having conversations a lot with their parent. Building concrete relationship with parent will be helpful for students in different ways.
In addition, the languages, especially the vocabulary in this poem are challenging so that the students need to make an effort to understand this poem well. Even though this poem’s vocabulary are difficult, students’ vocabulary level will be improved after going through this poem.
Lastly, this poem will remind students of their warm memory they had when they were little because this story is about the moment that many students might have. Therefore, the students would understand this poem well with their experience.
As I have mentioned, this poem will be an appropriate material to teach for high school students in terms of making relationship with their parent better, learning somehow difficult vocabulary and feeling sympathy . If you are looking for some literatures for your class, I fully recommend you this poem.
I enjoy your opinion. Before reading it, I think using a poem in the class is quite difficult to adapt. From your reading, however, I change my mind and try out for putting it into my class.
답글삭제The picture is so cute!
답글삭제1. They said the last sentence in the introduction part should be thesis sentence. But your thesis is something insufficient. Your writing is taking about why "The Red Hat" is good to teach to high school students, but the thesis only tells about the message of the poem.
답글삭제2. You have 4 supporting points in the body part. Maybe you can devide it into 4 paragraphs so that the reader can get the point easily.
3. You can use Vocabulary items instead of Vocabularies. It can not be used.
4. Your conclusion is nicely summerized. I wonder if it can be used 'I' in concluseion. Maybe you can change the last sentence to make your writing more authentic.
My parents didn't come with school at first, so I don't have such memories. In this situation, how to teach some students like me?
답글삭제What a cute baby!
답글삭제This poem reminds my childhood..